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Review:Bella Bug says:
HIII!!! It's so amazing it's a little formal and lacking build up of passion but still absolutly amazing!! I love James in this story his determination is every girls dream in a man!! And Scarlet just oozed innocence. I wish there had been more about the Carrows and having her name mentioned earlier in the story, but I thought it went well with the story line. It was really sweet and innocent and the passion between the two is almost heartbreaking (in a good way) and it was just really really good! :D

10/10

Bella Bug

Author's Response: I appriciate the contructive critisism, I may even come back and re-write some of it one day... probably not though. Scarlet was my way of draining my head of all other fanfic ideas and clearing my writers block, and I think it worked!
I think James is, to be honest, most girls' dream man anyway, seeing as he is completely and utterly... awesome.
It's funny you should mention the Carrows, as I was going to include a lot more about them, in fact I may even write another one-shot to include Scarlet's time with the Carrows (it wasn't pleasant, that's what I know) - but I wanted the one-shot to be based more around Scarlet and James NOW, rather than Scarlet before. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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