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Review:javct says:
Here with your review :)

I have heard about Ron/Luna before but I have never actually read it. I like it how Ron is still in love/intrigued with Hermione, but he's not over-the-top about it (like in most fan fics)

Your imagery in this chapter was good so far. It wasn't extravagant but it wasn't just "the flower was blue." You had just the right balance where you told us what was happening but you also left some room from the readers imagination.

Your characterisation was brilliant - especially for a Post-Hogwarts story. Onto the next chapter!
*Jaz, 9/10

Author's Response: Thanks so much for being such a willing reviewer! :3 Ron/Luna is, admittedly, a pairing I never gave much thought (if any) to before writing this, but I have sort of convinced myself it's plausible -- and hopefully you, too!

I love descriptions and imagery, so I tend to use a lot in my writing. :3 Thanks so much for the review, it means a lot!


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