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Review:adluvshp says:
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I have to say this was an AMAZING piece of writing. You wrote Molly so well!! I can totally see her having this sort-of-OCD being Percy's daughter. You did a great job capturing it! I loved your writing style too, the descriptions and the narrative flowed really well. I could feel the raw emotions as well.

The only little thing was, in one or two places you wrote "were" instead of "where" - this is a mistake a lot of people tend to make, better correct it though :)

Apart from that, this was an amazing piece of writing. I truly loved reading this! Great work!

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hi! I'm glad you chose this story!! this is one of my favourite pieces, simply because Molly is such a nutcase. It was really fun to write and explore since i haven't written anything with next gen's so it was new to me. I'm pleased you thought i captured Molly.

Thanks! I'll fix that, little embarassing, i must admit ;D. Silly mistake snuck right in there. Thank you so much for your review!


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