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Review:magnolia_magic says:
Hi! magnolia_magic here with your requested review! :)

I really enjoyed reading this one-shot. It was so fun and adorable, and I liked seeing Ron and Hermione's romance in a new, creative way.

I think the strongest point of this story is your writing style. You have a great narrative voice...it's very light and funny, and it works well with the story you're telling. I also love the dialogue between Amatis and Cariad. Their banter never seemed forced, and it always felt real to me. So basically, I thought it was extremely well-written :)

I also really liked your characterization of Amatis, and the way he develops throughout the story. His growing affection for the couple was one of my favorite elements of this story--he started taking Ron and Hermione under his wing, not because he had something to gain, but because it was the right thing to do. I also loved that Cariad teamed up with Amatis at the end. Very adorable and heartwarming :)

Another nice touch I noticed: I thought it was fitting that Luna was the only student who could see the cupids. That seems very true to her character.

I think this is an adorable story that will make people smile when they read it. It's very well-written, has great flow, and shows a lighthearted side to Ron and Hermione's story. If that's what you set out to accomplish, then you definitely nailed it! I loved reading this, and thanks so much for requesting!

--Maggie

Author's Response: Hi, Maggie - thanks so much for the lovely review. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it so much.

I had great fun writing it, and I became really fond of Amatis and Cariad. They mean well, even if they don't always quite get it right!

Thanks again for offering your reviewing services, and taking the time to be so thoughtful and helpful.


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