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Review:katti4493 says:
YAY!! It is Anthony at the end!!! This has been such a wonderful story and I want to thank you for writing it. It really took the story of Regulus, turned it upside down and made it totally your own. You have taken the world that J K bequeathed you and made it darker, more emotionally complex, and Regulus' descent into madness has been thought provoking and compelling. The way you have juxtaposed the ideas of good and evil in Regulus' head has been amazing, and it is all obviously a product of his guilt for killing Anthony. The inclusion of Barty made it acutely clear what Regulus had lost by making Barty ambitious and manipulative, whereas Anthony was honest but with very realistic human flaws. The evolution of Will from this psycho bully to this very complex character just shows how much you understand humans, while many stories on this site just follow the high romantic model. You had no Mary Sue's, you remembered a great deal of the characters were Slytherins and Deatheaters and never succumbed to changing their fundamentals or giving them a happy ending. In Sarah and Elizabeth you produced girls who you sympathised with and also got a bit annoyed with. And in Topher you created the victim that is needed in such a dark story. It's been absolutely wonderful how you carefully paced your plot, giving the readers little hints as it goes along without being tempted to rush to the big exciting ending. Thank you so much for this story and I can't wait to read the final few chapters!!

Author's Response: *blushes very very badly*
Thank you! I can't even...I don't even have a proper response. I wanna write something witty and equal, but I'm just sitting here staring at the screen wearing this big, doofusey grin.
I just...yeah.
Thank you so much!! :D --Jenna

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