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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
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What an intersting pairing, and one I definetely haven't seen before!

Fred and George are always difficult to pull off, epecially when you're only using one of them and you can't have the witty banter playing off each other. You captured his humor and personality pretty well, and the argument with zonko is totally something he would get involved in.

Hermione was a little OOC, but I get that she pretty much had to be for the story to work. Having her stay in to do homework and the way she was stressing out about it was definetely typical Hermione. My only complaint was that i really can't picture her swearing like that. Overall I'd say you effectively captured her personality even if it was actions that she wouldn't normally do.

Overall this was a very enoyable read and a fun speculation on an unusual pairing.

Author's Response: Hi there!! Thanks for your review!!!

I am glad you found this interesting and fun to read!! Good to know I was able to pull off George a bit well. I know Hermione was kind of OOC, I'll edit and cut down on the swearing a bit xD

Thank you so much for your kind review!


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