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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
It's me from the forums with your review!

Ok so I think its fairly obvious that the main character is Pansy Parkinson. You did a really good job at capturing her personality. The pride and conceit she has really come accross, as well as the disdain and condesencion she feels towards Hermione and the Gryffindors. I always thought Pansy was pretty similar to the girls in Mean Girls, and I really got that vibe here as well.

You could really she how self sbsorbed she is when she was expecting to get all Draco's attention, not caring at all about what his mission was or what kind of danger he might be in.

Honestly she's not a very likable character, but you did a really good job of portraying her and showing her personality without directly telling who it was.

Author's Response: Hey!
Yep, you're right, it's Pansy xD Someone would be really dumb if they can't guess that, haha :P

Your reviews make me smile :) Thank you for such a sweet review. I am glad that you think I captured her character well, showing her conceited and self absorbed side.

Thanks a lot!!


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