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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
It's me from the forums with your review!

In general I'm really skeptical of the whole Tom/Minerva possibility, but you sold it really well here!

First of all you set the scene really well with the descriptions of everything that was happening with the war. I'm guessing Hannah Potter is Harry's great-aunt?

You did a good job of showing how Tom and Minerva were both coming from brojen homes with nowehere else to go, so they actually had a lot in common on a certain level despite their differing motivations and allegiances.

You captured Tom's transition to Voldemort very well, he felt so creepy! You did an excellent job of capturing the really dark feel of the whole thing.

Good job!

Author's Response: I love Tom/Minerva; they're such an under loved ship.
Thanks :) and yeah Hannah is. I'm glad I captured his transitions well, I was really worried about it.

Thanks for this review, it's been helpful :)
*Jaz


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