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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
It's me from the forums with your review!

This story definetely packs a lot of emotion into a small space. You very effectively captured the emotions of a very tragic love story between two complex and layered characters.

It was a nice touch having Dean Thomas be the law enforcement official that visits. It kind of brings the whole story full circle because he was previously brought to malfoy manor as a prisoner. It really shows how much the tables have turned.

You seem very adept at writing Narcissa's character. You effectively captured everything she must have been going through, and how her material wealth didn't bring her any joy.

Lucius was well written and believable as well. I think the movies actually show this contrast better then the books how in the 2nd movie Lucius was swaggering like a boss but by the last movie he was a broken man. You really captured how he would have ended up after everything.

Overall a very touching story.

Author's Response: Hi..!
Thanks a lot for reading & reviewing!
You totally make me feel flattered.
I appreciate your in-depth review.
I am glad you think the emotion overall, Narcissa and Lucius's characters and the thing about Dean Thomas, was all good.
This was my first immediate Post-War story so I'm glad to know I was able to pull it off.
Thank you so much once again!!

Cheers!


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