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Review:theelderwand says:
Been threatening to get my lazy posterior over here and read and review this tale for ages. Don't die of shock, now that I finally did it.

Glad I did make it over, too. Stellar story. You've caught the angsty brood of James here quite well. But let me back up, Harry's reaction at St. Mungo's, focusing on what's important I thought was well done (as were Ginny and Lily's reactions, very in character).

Loved the way you described James lying around deciding which feature of his apartment he would fixate on for any given day - that was truly a brilliant piece of writing.

But I must say the most powerful and painful part had to be his talk with the Manager before that. That just hurt - more so because it just made infinite sense that it would play out that way.

Liked the exchanges with Hoskins, especially via the kids request for an autograph, and the "You're really pathetic," response in the end was awesome. Still, it was good to see James out fly and out-snark the git.

Fred to the rescue is a great set up for Morning Waffle. Well done indeed.

Curious as to how many chapters are left?

I'll be waiting impatiently.

Till then, Cheers!

Eldy

P.S. Forgive me for doing that thing I hate as an author - reading all the chapters and only leaving one review! But I just couldn't stop reading...

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