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Review:classicblack says:
Wow. Just wow. I really don't know how I feel about this story or how to describe it. It was so utterly different from anything I've ever read. It was deep and dark and mind-boggling. Well done.
I loved that you gave the Mirror of Erised a voice. It always interests me to read about characters that no one ever believed to be real characters. It was also nice that the Mirror mentioned Ron. I do wish it had mentioned Harry a bit more.
Praises aside, I thought it was a bit unrealistic that Bill would be so ignorant of how he treated his youngest daughter. Being a member of the Weasley family and growing up with five brothers and a sister, wouldn't Bill understand that every child should have the same amount of attention?
In addition, there were just a few capitilization errors- like at the beginnings of some lines of dialogue.
Overall, this was really well done! Nice job! It was so different and spectacular!
Happy writing,
classicblack

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Ooh - I'll go fix them now :) It was a slightly random idea I had during the summer, so I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Ah - Bill. Yes, I've had some trouble with him acting this way aswell. It's something that I'm attempting to re-adjust, my original idea was that he was absorbed with work that he often got carried away, and since he'd spent the last twenty years living with part-veelas - he had gotten used to perfection. But I don't think I've exlplained that correctly yet (nor here!) so - its a work in progress :P

Thanks for the review :)


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