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Review:javct says:
Back again!
There's a turn of events I didn't except. When the flashback first started I almost rolled my eyes because it was the typical girl-gets-drunk-and-makes-a-stupid-mistake but your wasn't. I feel really sorry for Dominique now! Poor girl!

You defiantly managed to de-cliche the story :) Once again, characterisation was really good and the flashback was brilliant as well. Your description was better in this chapter which made it easier to imagine and read :D I wonder what is going to happen when everyone finds out... hmm.

Really good story and I am defiantly going to be keeping track of this story for here on in because I am really curious to see how everything pans out ;)
Best of luck on the rest of your story :)

Author's Response: Haha this made me giggle with the whole 'rolled my eyes' line, I was actually going for the whole, make it seem cliche then BAYM... not so I am glad it worked :D

Yey, you are the best and this review has now made me a happy bunny (Ive been having a bad day -_-) Thankyouuu x

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