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Review:javct says:
Here comes the review!!!
Honestly, I don't normally read Ron/Hermione because they either 1) to cliche - i have a thing against cliche stories - and 2) they are really typical.
Your story on the other hand has a breath of fresh air because it wasn't told from a canon characters POV but from a OC character. I really enjoyed this story and it has kind of made me start to ship Ronmione again... *nervous laugh*

The characterisation of Ron & Hermione were really good even though they were told from an onlookers POV.
The pace of the story was really good. You made it really obvious when a new year had started - other than having the subtitle 'the next year' or something and the progression of the characters coming-of-age (in a way) and falling in love was really well paced as well :)
Overall, really good story :) 8/10

Author's Response: Hello! Thanks for reviewing! I'm really glad you set up the topic:-)

I'm so glad you enjoyed my story, and didn't find it too cliche. It was lots of fun to write. I'm also really pleased that it's made you think again about Ron and Hermione. I absolutely love them:-)

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