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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi! TAG!

This is a nice idea for a story! I know how pregnancy stories are cliche's (and I know this is for a de-cliche it challenge :D) but for some reasons there's something about them that I just love. It just seems like something that would happen once in a while.

I think you could use a beta to help a little with punctuation because I noticed a few missing commas and it didn't really help the flow and it made it all feel quite rushed and distracting. Just, in general, try to slow down a little :) Overall though, I liked this opening chapter and I like how you've centered your story around Dominique, because these kinds of stories are based around Lily or Rose, Victoire etc. Great job!

Author's Response: I like the pregnancy clishe's as well :D (I like most cliche's though xD). I did actually get a Beta today :D She is going to start this week so kinda freaky you said that :P

Got to love Dominique!
Thankyou x

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