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Review:Keira7794 says:
Hello :) This is Keira7794 from the forums (GCR review the person above... :D ) :

Hehe this made me giggle :)

I like the idea of the plot and I can clearly imagine Harry and James planting revenge on Ron. It's the kind of relationship I envision them to have.

Just really quick spelling error, when Ginny and Lily enter, Ginny says 'Lily and you two James' - this should be 'too' instead of 'two'.

I would of loved to of seen (or read :P) Hermione's reaction to the mention of SPEW and that her daughter felt the same way?

Overall, I thought this was a great story that flowed really well and the characterisation was great :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, I'm glad I made you giggle today!
I will check out the spelling error, thanks for the help!
As for the idea of seeing Hermione's reaction to the mention of SPEW, it would be possible to write it in; I can't believe I never thought about that! Thanks again, I'll try to make the improvement!

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