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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
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This was a very well written chapter, they were you captured dominique's emotions was superb. We could really feel all the stress she was under and the expectations she had to live up to and how everything was going out of whack.

If what you're going for here is to take a cliched idea and write a non-cliched story than I must say you have suceeded. This is definetely a far cry from the typical Draco and Hermione become head boy and girl, drink too much butterbeer and have a baby story. You did an excellent job of dealing with a sensitive issue in a realistic and believable way.

You're off to a solid start and the story has a lot of potential.

Author's Response: Yey a review :D Thankyou for the kind words. They mean alot! I am glad you think I got the whole de-cliche thing right, I was worried it was still quite cliche'd. And I'm glad you think this has potential. Its my favourite story out of everything of mine so its good to know people think its of a good standard.

Thankyou xx

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