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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
I'm here from the forums with your review!

The first thing I noticed is that your descriptions were excellent. You used very effecitve language to capture the setting and emotions for us and give us a clear picture of what is going on.

It's defninetely a challenge to ship Tom Riddle while keeping him in character since its such a major part of his character that he had never loved anybody, so that's just something you have to work around. There aren't any problems so far.

The ending of this chapter was a very effective cliff hanger that will capture the reader's attention.

So far you are of to a promising start with some very interesting characters.

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks, I'm always worried about my descriptions because sometimes they don't work out the way I want them too (if that makes sense)

I'm glad that I kept him in character. I thought it was going to be hard because he is such an evil character in the books and developing that level of evil is going to hard.

Thanks for the review :)

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