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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
I really didn't care much for Sirius's attitude in this chapter. It drove me crazy mad the way he kept saying he was going to plan to steal Elsa back from Damon. It's childish and if he really loves Elsa he won't let jealousy rage bring out the worse in him by attempting to steal Elsa from Damon. And I don't like his reasoning in the last paragraph for helping Damon either; that the only reason he would help Damon was to keep him alive so he can take Elsa away from him instead of winning her by default when Damon is killed. But that's just my thoughts on Sirius. I really didn't like him at all in this chapter. I like Damon much better, he may be cocky, sure, but he's at least a good character with good intentions.

Also, you really pulled at my heartstrings when Damon was on his soapbox asking Sirius for help so he could steal the scroll from Voldemort and then hide it from both Voldemort and the Egyptian. My heart was breaking for him and I feel the tears welling, ready to fall the moment he's killed.

Anyway, great chapter, even if I didn't like Sirius's mindset in it. :)

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