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Review:CambAngst says:
So I liked this chapter. You're obviously still working through some typos, but I gather from your responses to your other reviews that you're aware of that, so I won't dwell on those.

My biggest suggestion is that I think your writing could benefit tremendously from a good beta reader. I know that those are hard to come by around here, but for you it would be well worth the effort. You have a very interesting premise and you've clearly put a lot of thought into it. I love your descriptiveness and your use of language. So it really pains me to see this beautiful tapestry you're weaving interrupted by silly little mistakes.

I really liked the insights you offered the reader into Rowena's thought processes. I think you probably could have expanded that part a lot without giving anything away. I agree 100% with the other reviewers who said that this should have been longer. There were so many interesting things going on, but a lot of them just came up a little short.

Your ending, aside from the bit about whether she landed in or on a heap, was good. I find myself really wanting to know where she is and who she is meeting with. So don't be a stranger with your chapter updates. ;)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Yeah, I know about the typos, and will hopefully go through and get rid of them in an update.

Thanks for the suggestion about a beta... I haven't looked at this story for a while, and maybe getting a beta to start going over things would be good :)

Thank you for reviewing! :)

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