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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
Oh my word. Julia, this is brilliant. Everything about it is so perfect, that I could very easily regard this as canon. The torment Draco endured mentally, Luna's stoicism in the face of doom, the description of the balance of the world powers and how life in the manor is. It's brilliant. I'm sorry to use that word again, but I really can't wrap my mind around any other right now. The dialogue was effective as well. The most powerful two lines, that sort of defined their relationship to one another in this fic was when draco said he cannot kill and when Luna reminded him he had not locked the door. It really was quite moving and powerful. It is such an unfortunate twist of fate that this generation was robbed of their youth and shoved into a game that had began long before they were even thought of. :(

Booo.

Anyways, I'm done rambling. This was gorgeous. Well done!!
melissa

Author's Response: Eee, thank you so much! This fic has been stagnating on my computer for ages...this literally must be the tenth rewrite or something. I'm so interested in both of these characters (and I'm on an infinite quest for the perfect characterisation of Draco) and I've always wondered what sort of dynamic would exist between them, if any. I feel that Luna's the most understanding of all the characters in the HPverse, and if she ever did meet Draco (I doubt it, but in my headcanon...she did) she'd be the type who would try to understand and help him. Aaanyway, haha.
Thank you so much for such a beautiful, wonderful review :') ♥

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