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Review:LoopyLemon says:
Hey! ITS A NEW CHAPTER!!! *dances and babbles incoherantly*
Ok. Down to this reviewing buisness. I love it. But I guess that isn't a surprise. It's an extremely lovable story that fully deserves my intense loveyness (if you didn't understand that it means that I LOVE THIS STORY AND I WOULD MARRY IT IF IT WAS AT ALL POSSIBLE). You are still writing the Doctor beautifully and portraying the culture gap that exists between the TARDIS team (love that name!) and Erica and Lysander really well. I loved that line about if Erica dies the Lysander will have to write the transfiguration essay on his own. I also loved the quip about Lysander's mum and the password to the secret passageway (Teddy is awesome. It's true). And I love Amy! Though I always love her. She is awesome!
A bit of constructive critisism. This chapter moves at quite a fast pace compared to the other two. It's not necessarily a bad thing, it just takes more effort to follow (and after a chemistry exam my effort levels are non-existant :P)
Overall it's another excellent chapter and I can't wait until the next one comes. Oh and I love the banner!!

Author's Response: Eeep, thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying this story so much and thank you for reading!

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