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Review:Akussa says:
Hi! Happy Review-a-Fellow-Gryffie Day!

Congratulation on such a wonderful chapter. I loved it from beginning to end and in all dimensions. The writting was compelling, the characters engaging and full fledge, the action is fast paced, non stop and enjoyagble. I loved it!

Two little sentences gave me trouble though. I feel there might be some slight structural problems but, then again, English isn't my fist langage so it might be a misunderstanding of my part! I share them with you none the less, so that you can judge for yourself.

"Fully half of their class had to go"; I'm not sure the 'fully' is necessary

"Maybe he was better at being talking them out"; I think the 'being' shouldn't be there

That's it though, nothing else jumped at me. I really enjoyed this chapter and can't wait to see the next one! Great, great job!!

Author's Response: Whoops, yeah, the "being" was a typo. Thanks for catching it!

"Fully" isn't necessary, you're right, but it's often used in front of an amount to emphasize it, which is what I was going for here. :)

I'm really glad you enjoyed this - thank you so much for the review! :)

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