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Review:Ravenclaw333 says:
I was so pleased to see you'd updated! This story never fails to put a smile on my face - it's so well written, realistic and sweet, and this chapter was no exception. Like you, I love the Christmas season, and it really added to the atmosphere of this chapter. It's great to see those little snippets of characterisation you keep slipping in - like James playing with his Snitch - and the details you reveal about each relationship. The way you've written the developing friendship between Beth and Severus is fantastic - so gradual and subtle, and extremely rewarding to read. Thank you for the fantastic chapter and the fantastic story :)

Author's Response: I'm pleased to see you dropped by! :) The fact that you think it's well-written and realistic, that just really makes my day. Readers are never far from my mind in writing, and if it's received well, I am always gratified in immeasurable ways! ♥ Hee.

The Christmas season is my favorite! I'm so glad how this worked out, too -- I'll be posting the wintery chapters, like this one, right as the holiday season approaches. I couldn't have planned this better if I tried!

Characterization is so important in a story, and I love including it, because I think it's extremely important that my readers know the characters, too. I want them to be a spectator, not just reading at face value, and thanks to your compliments (THANK YOU), I feel as though I'm getting it right. :)

Gahh. This review. ♥ I can never thank you enough for it!


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