Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:foreverfleur says:
Ok a couple of things---I loved this chapter just as much as the previous two.

I also really love that you are piecing out so many different relationships, but not only are you weaving them together flawlessly--you are taking them in such interesting directions. I love this dynamic between Harry and Teddy. Gosh--I had forgotten all about them. But, not only are they dealing with the loss of Fred, they are dealing with so much more and that Harry would see Teddy as a way to get back to Remus or Tonks was just a brilliant insight into Harry's character. Really great job.

I also like how you have seemingly chosen Arthur as this kind of thread between the characters, between the plotlines. Though I wouldn't say there is a 'main' character in this story I just really like how you seem to using Arthur as this kind of umbrella figure--fitting because he is the patriarch of the Weasley clan but also just so intriguing because his character is also underexplored.

Moral of that ramble--amazing job! I can't believe this story has so few reviews!! Its absolutely fabulous!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing another time! I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter just as much as the last two.

Aw- I'm so happy that you're enjoying the directions I'm taking the relationships. Yeah- Teddy and Harry's roles in this story came as a burst of inspiration while I was writing the story and I'm pleased with the way their scenes turned out.

I actually had Arthur chosen for me for the "Depth of Character" challenge and this is the idea I came up with. I enjoyed writing him as the thread between all these characters because he is, as you said, the patriarch of the Weasley clan.

Thanks for all your comments- I really enjoy readin gyour reviews!

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 515
Submit Report: