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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
I wish I knew what to say for this chapter, but I don't. I think they're both still holding onto a lot of regrets from their past and I'm happy to see them start to accept that they've been giving this second chance to mend themselves. I like that they got to spend time together and I was disappointed that it had to end so soon. Do the Muggles recognize him or are they just frightened by the look/tattoos? Speaking of that, I think my favorite line was when Lucy was inhaling his scent that Azkaban hadn't taken away from him. I think it's just a wonderful way to mention how much Azkaban has ripped from Sirius without saying too much. It's lovely. :)

Author's Response: You said it well - they're both still a bit torn between the past and what may be to come. I couldn't just let them have a perfect night out, now could I? Scars this deep take more than one kiss to heal, unfortunately. As for the Muggles, they thought they were safe because they live in a secluded, mostly uninhabited part of town (as mentioned in chapter one, I believe) but they either ventured a little too far into mainstream London or people from other parts of the city came to the festival and saw him. Poor Sirius can't catch a break :(

I liked writing that line! I thought it was a sort of subtle way of letting her get close to him and get a little lost in her past with him.

Thanks for your lovely reviews! They always leave me smiling and brighten up my day :)

Amanda


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