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Review:Harrypotterbookworm says:
HA! This is a funny story. Really interesting and original concept that I don't think I've ever seen explored before. I like how you mentioned all of the gods and linked them together, it really made the story seem complete. Also, you made them all quite different as well as relate-able (well, to a wizard anyway ;P ).

I would suggest maybe describing a little more about their situation, or where Zeus is ect. as it can a little sounds like a list. As interesting as that list is. Maybe mention what a family get together would go down like. :P I would also advise you to reduce the amount of spacing between paragraphs.

I can see you put in some research behind the story, which is awesome and adds a sense of believe-ability to this. Very enjoyable and interesting!

Hugs, HPB.

P.S Guess Who?

Author's Response: Hello Nikki :P

Thanks! I like doing that - coming up with original ideas that nobody's explored before. I can't take credit for the gods and the linking of the gods together and the characterisation of them - that was all done for me by the Greeks :P

A family get together would be fun, though I don't really have any plans to revisit and rewrite this story, it is one of my oldest ones :P Which definitely accounts for the horrendous spacing.

Does it count as research if I just took what I learned in Classics and applied it here? :P


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