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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
Hey there! Me again! :D

Well! I really liked this story too! :D You're a wonderful writer, unsurprisingly.

I like the fact that this was written about a minor character, but you stayed true to his characterization and I really liked that. Well done!

The story was short, sweet, simple. Again. :] I like that. It made me smile. The one thing I might change is at the beginning where you say, "Mr. Dumbledore requires your assistance Phineas!" I think it should be "Professor Dumbledore," but I suppose that's personal opinion.

Random sidenote: I loved the line, "Since a young age he had been one to enjoy adventure and thrills, to bask in the glory of being correct and ordering around his minions." That was hilarious. :D

So, overall, very well-written. I liked it a lot. :D

--Emily

Author's Response: Heyy!! thanks once again for your sweet review!

I am flattered you liked it so much and it made you smile :) I love writing about Minor characters so yeah :D ...

Haha glad you found that line hilarious. It took me a couple of shots before I think I got phineas right xD

thanks again!!! :)

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