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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
Me again. :]

Well, another great story! And I am a COMPLETE Dramione-fan. I absolutely adore them. So this was great for me to read. Thanks for that. :D

I really liked your characterization of the two of them, though it was a bit cliche for Draco and his mother to be let off the hook while Lucius was sent to Azkaban. AND for Draco to change so drastically in such a very short amount of time. But hey, cliches are fine if you write them well. They didn't ruin this story in the slightest.

I enjoyed reading it and I loved how their banter escalated at the end. Really cute.

There were a couple of places where you capitalized words that don't need to be (like "Elevator" and "Brunette"), but other than that, spelling and grammar were pretty good.

I really liked the story. Well done!

--Emily

Author's Response: Hello again :)

Thank you so much for reading && reviewing. I am a diehard Dramione fan too and I'm glad you liked this :)

Cliches can't be avoided sometimes, at least by me, hehe. And by the way, again it states in the HP wiki that it is indeed true that Draco && Narcissa were let off the hook and Lucius sent to azkaban (and says so in the HP Lexicon too -- it was mentioned by JKR in an interview). Hope that explains it :)

I am glad you enjoyed it, and there are a few minor mistakes I need to correct so I'll look into them when I edit.

Thanks once again!!

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