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Review:ravenclaw_princess says:
Hehe, this was hilarious. I love the plan that Harry and James came up with and I love how Ron is turning it around to get them back. It was very clever.

The characterisation of both Ron and Harry was spot on. Harry knew exactly what would make Ron most uncomfortable and his relationships with James is very authentic. Ron was great; his reaction to James question and how he dodged it was exactly like him. I like how you described him going from red to pale as the conversation continued.

There were a few little grammar issues through the story, little things like loved instead of loved or two instead of too. It's nothing major and can be easily picked up with another read through. Over all though, it is a nicely written story. It was witty and clever and a joy to read. I found myself completely hooked as I wanted to know what the plan was. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words! This was my first one-shot ever so I was never all that secure about it (until I got a banner, it never got much of a reaction).
I will definitly look for the grammar issues. Like I said, my first eer story and English isn't my first language so I sometimes don't see them but I'll do my best!
Once again, thank you and I'm glad you found the plan was well executed!!

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