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Review:Akussa says:
Hi! you're tagged!

This was such a good little story, good job for a first story!

I like the type of narration you chose, very descriptive and giving lots of informations. I would have loved to read more and see Nott get punished though!!

What needs a bit a work though, is the characer construction. It's a bit harder to do it in a one-shot than in a multi-chaptered story but it's possible to do it. By adding a bit of emotional description, for example.

Congratulation on a very clean story as well. I didn't notice any blatant errors so that is great. Good work!

Author's Response: Thankyou! It is actually going to be longer than this, but only a few more chapters so you would be able to see Nott's punishment ;P If I can decide what to do..hah I'll try to add some emotional description and so on in the coming chapters :)
Thanks again :)

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