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Review:Beeezie says:
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I really liked this story. It was sweet, and I thought that your depiction of Molly, Arthur, and Bill was great. It fits with everything that we've seen of Molly and Arthur that they'd be happy to have her brother for Christmas, and Molly's walking out on her parents was such classic Molly (and explains why her parents are never mentioned!). We know nothing about Fabian and Gideon from canon other than that they existed and were in the Order, but I really liked your portrayal of them, too - you made them close, but they were clearly different people. I feel like often when I've read about Fabian and Gideon, they're basically interchangeable, but you've given them each very distinct personalities, which I like a lot. The interactions between the siblings in particular felt very real to me - they each had their own different dynamic. I also loved the stuffed animals - great touch.

This was a really lovely job, and I enjoyed it a lot! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this nice review!
I'm glad you liked the way I perceived these characters, they were so much fun to write, particularily Arthur and Molly. As for the twins, I hesitated a lot when creating them because I know some people see twins like Fred ans George as the norm : identical in everyway, even in the personality. It's not how I see that though; all the twins I know have very distinct personalities and this is how I wanted Fabian and Gideon to be. I'm glad you liked that though, thanks for telling me!

The stuffed animals is a tradition in my family and I just love it. I bought my goddaughter a giant panda when she was born and now, at 3, it's her best friend!

Thanks again for the review, it made my day!

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