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Review:Beeezie says:
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This was a really, really terrific piece. I loved the way you depicted each House differently - I believed that Sprout would have the most trouble disappointing a student and would see more of them as worthy, and that Snape would walk in already knowing who he wanted to choose. Dumbledore convincing Flitwick to name Goldstein and McGonagall convincing Dumbledore to name Ron was also really interesting, and I liked the idea that it was McGonagall who stuck up for Ron. My only comment there was that I would have like to see a bit more conversation about Neville in particular, and also Seamus and Dean. Overall, though, it was really well done, and I definitely felt creeped out by the idea that some of them had nothing else next to their names.

Great idea, and great execution! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this nice review! I'm really glad you enjoyed and thought that the characters were, well, in-character!
I did think about talking about Neville but chose against it because it was too early in the story. What I mean is, Neville had not started showing his persona at this point. He began showing determination and hard work when he joined the DA and that was in fifth year. I thought that, based on the information we had by the end of the fourth book, McGonagall would not have considered Neville for the selection.

Thanks again, this made my day (even if the answer comes a bit late) !

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