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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
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This is definetely impressive for your first story! I really enjoyed Caitie's characterization. She definetaly has an attitude and is not the typical Hufflepuff. I like the way you confronted the house stereotypes directly and threw them out the window. She seems like a realistic character that we can relate to.

Overall you have a nice tone and I really enjoyed your use of humor, which came accross well. I would just recommend going a little more in depth, and letting the reader see her traits and abilities demonstrated raher than just describing them. Overall you're off to a really good start.

Author's Response: Thank you for thinking it's impressive for my first story! That is such a relief! haha
Thanks for the tips, I'll try to include them when I edit.
Thanks so much! :)

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