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Review:Phoenix_Flames says:
Hello there! I'm here with your review as requested. First I just want to apologize for the extremely long wait. I am so sorry that it took me so long to get around to this. I have just been crazy busy with school work, and my queue has been huge. But I finally made time for this. Thank you for being so patient!

Okay, the first thing I want to do is tell you that your chapter image has timed out with Photobucket. I'm getting that small little blue and white image. I just thought I would let you know that. ;)

But moving on. I think you're off to a brilliant start here. This will clearly be a wonderful, unique story, and you already have me dying to read more.

Really great job. It is always extremely important that the first chapter is compelling enough to make your readers want to continue, and you have most certainly done that here. Excellent job! You really pulled me in from the beginning.

It was a great way to start the story. I'm glad that you didn't take the time to dwell on all the changes between the conclusion of the series and here or any of that. But rather you dove directly into the plot. That's brilliant.

And you have definitely set up such an original scene here! You managed to make the whole time travel thing original in this. I am dying to learn more.

Harry and Ginny have a brilliant connection here; that is easily seen. Their dialogue flows so easily together without even really trying. It just all runs together so perfectly. Excellent job in that aspect.

And what a way to leave the chapter off! You now have me wanting to continue on.

I didn't spot any mistakes, I don't think. There aren't any off the top of my head, and your descriptions were lovely, as was your flow. You didn't dwell on any one aspect for too long. It was wonderful how you jumped from dialogue, to actions, to descriptions, to emotions. It all ran together so perfectly. Brilliant job!

I can't wait to see where you take this plot. It is evident that you have put a lot of thought and effort into it. Brilliant job!

And now I don't quite know what else to tell you! Wonderful job! I would love to hit the next few chapters right now, but unfortunately I have about 30 stories in my queue, so I can only hit this chapter for now. However, feel free to come request the next at any time! Thank you!

Great job!

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you so much for coming by my story! I'm extremely grateful! Firstly, I would like to tell you that you had EXACTLY the response I have been looking for in my readers! I loved the fact that you liked my idea and yep, you're right, I definitely have put a lot of effort into this story! It's extremely close to my heart!

Hahaha yeah, I know about the image. I just didn't get around to updating it yet. And no problem, I completely understand about the queue. I'll definitely come back again! I really wanna know what you think about the next chapters! =)

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