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Review:justonemorefic says:
OMG DRACO/LUNA I MUST READ.

You actually reminded me that the Death Eaters are human. I mean, horrible horrible people, some who are literally insane, but some of them with families and then you get reminded of the harsh truth: ‘No, of course I did. What do you think? I’m not going soft. That’s how you get killed.’

The descriptions of Luna ;_; Omg there is downtrodden and then there is heartbreaking. The little details -- her eyes, the sweater -- I can actually see her strength through all of it.

AND I DID NOT SEE THAT DREAM COMING D: and now I am sad, because for a moment I was like YES DRACO, BE A GOOD BOY.

OH GOOD, HE'S TRYING.

Omg I love your dialogue. I love everything about this conversation. Also, I love that she thinks he's going to poison her.

Oh, burrrn. they say I’m worthless and you’re only fit to deal with the worthless people-’

;_; desperate Luna. Like I don't know how to say it BUT IT'S PERFECT AND THIS IS SO HEADCANON I CAN'T. And the last part is SOULCRUSHING ANGST OMG JULIA WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME. Clinging to the little bits of hope and then her faltering smile when he goes back to lock the door and oh my god Draco just escape with her to the countryside and make a happy AU now please.

♥

Author's Response: EEE HELLO~

I've always kind of thought of them that way...I felt that JKR really worked to present them like that in the books with the fate of the Malfoys, etc. Not just black and white but shades of grey etc etc~

Downtrodden is like...my genre, baha.

The dream was...the dream was probably the only bit I /didn't/ rewrite. Except it wasn't a dream in the first few incarnations, which were sloppily written and very shippy indeed. This fic has been stagnating on my hard drive since like...2008. I kid you not.

THIS IS 100% MY HEADCANON. Heh. And of course it's angsty, you know I love my angst! And /of course/ he couldn't have let her go. Draco's a cowardy custard. In all incarnations of this fic and variants that I've never written...it always ended with him locking the door. SORRY TO KILL YOUR DREAMS. (the dream is collapsing)

thank you thank you thank you for such a lovely review! ♥

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