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Review:Beeezie says:
Hey, I'm here for Gryffie review tag!

I found this to be a really interesting chapter. At first I was a little afraid that the orphanage thing would end up feeling too similar to Riddle, but you quickly dispelled that fear. The way you describe Jayde's first unintentional bits of magic was great, and I felt like you really captured her emotions really well - her sense of betrayal in particular, and the anger that ended up bubbling to the surface. It felt quite realistic, and I though that it was an excellent job.

I also thought that your writing style was quite strong - I'm big on the mechanics and prose aspects of stories, and I'm always excited to see an author who can do them well. You definitely did a great job with this. I hope you're still active!

Author's Response: Awww, what a pleasant surprise! I thought the Gryffie tag had died! Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing, dear! I'm really glad you liked the chapter! Thank you for all the compliments; this is the first review I've gotten in MONTHS! Thanks a billion! *hugs*

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