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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
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First of all I have to say that I absolutely loved the imagery and descriptions in this chapter. You really have a way with words and making us feel like we're right there in the scene, especially your descriptions of the slum, I could almost smell it.

You had a nice play on the traditional Sirius pun, and I'm guessing which cousin it was, probably not Bellatrix:)

That was an interestigng introduction of Rachael as well. Was that Lucius and Narcissa that were glaring at her in the flashback?

I always wondered what it wa like for Sirius when he first escaped since we don't relly see him until he randomly shows up at Hogwarts.

Great chapter and definetely an intriguing start!

Author's Response: Hi there!

I'm so glad you liked my descriptions. This chapter was the first time I really made an effort to include a lot of vivid imagery, and I'm glad that it seems to have worked for everyone.

Yeah, I doubt it was her :) I'm glad you liked how I went into talking about the play on his name. I wanted to give it a bit of an edge.

You're right - good catch! I'm happy that you like her character so far, and I hope you read on and discover more about her.

I did try to capture what I see as an under-appreciated time period in Sirius's life, and it makes me happy that you appreciate it, too.

Thanks for your very kind review! :)

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