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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
I really like this story for breaking all the cliches of a typical hufflepuff.

Caitie seems to have a very strong personallity already within your story which is a very good thing as you can build within it and expand her character either making her personality stronger or changing it slightly to her be a more complex or complicated chatacter which will be really interesting to see what you will do with her :D

There are a few typos within it but if you just go over it slightly and alter them then they're very easily fixed.

I also feel that the story flows really well which helps the reader be eased into the story better making them want to read on.

I'm interested to see how the character of Georgiana will develop as she actually hasn't said anything yet which will be quite interesting to see how she also develops.

Well Done and I will definitely be reading on :D

GinevraMollyPotter

Author's Response: I'm so happy you like it!

I'm really glad that her personality seems strong and I'm excited to take that somewhere :P

Yep, I was a little too impatient to proofread so I shall be editing it soon. heh.

Yay! I often have difficulty with flow, so that's good.

Georgiana wasn't even meant to be in it but she just popped up! I'll have to make sure she actually does develop and my mind doesn't forget about that :/

I'm so excited that you will be reading on! Thanks so much :D


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