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Review:Bobby Dazzler says:
Howdy hun, stopping by to give some love to your story and I'm so glad I did - I normally, as a rule, HATE time travel stories because no one can pull them off that well, or I get confused, or they're just SOOO cliche they're not funny.

For starters, I found the method in which Harry found himself transported back in time to be unique! Falling through a fountain is certainly different, then having him transported across the country bobbing up and down whilst upside down made me smile, the visual I was creating in my head was a bit sadistic for something as simple as that, but I'm not right in the head lol.

The writing in this was beautiful, it flowed seemlessly, it didn't feel rushed even though it was a short chapter - you highlighted the "present" being Harry vs Malfoy and the events which lead him to be transported back in time, and the confusion Harry felt was so realistic, particularly with the great ending of three words - October 31... 1976. Enough to scare anyone when you're not expecting to be jolted back through time, I'm sure!

I really enjoyed this chapter and can't wait to read more, I might even forgo the BvB battle and just keep reading tbh, I'm intregued lol. Also, love the little line break images you've got in here, so pretty :)

A great first chapter for your story, really interested in finding out where it goes, and considering my natural hatred for time travel fics, that's saying something lol :) Well done!

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for stopping by. :)

You flatter me so much. :') I'm glad this story is working for you and that it slightly altered your opinion of time travel fics. Hopefully it won't dissapoint in the future! :D

~Khanh


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