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Review:ravenclaw_princess says:
Poor Ginny. I could really sense her irritation in this story. She just wanted to play Quidditch and get away from it all an Zach was just getting in the way. He did have a fair point that Ginny had hardly asked him nicely for the quaffle, but it's not like he was using it. I could see her getting more and more annoyed with every passing second, especially with his smug little comments. Zach knew he had the power and milked it for all he could.

That boy's hygiene is terrible. Two years without washing a pair of socks!!! That's just gross. I'd hate to know what's growing in them.

The story was a well written and I don't notice any major grammar or spelling issues. The flow was good too. There was quite a lot of banter going on between the two and I would have given up and walked away, but Ginny is stubborn and doesn't let anyone walk over her and this really came through. Well done.

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for the review, I'm just sorry about the horribly long time it's taken me to reply to it. Sorry about that! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed this one shot, something a bit different, it was for a challenge so many years ago on another site. I really enjoyed writing it for that reason - Ginny goes off like a fire cracker. Actually, I think to date this is the first and only thing I have written from Ginny's POV that I've actually liked and think I've done her character justice. Interesting lol. Thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed it :) Bobby xx

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