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Review:parashar_harry says:
its a good story .
i liked it. it is moving very fast.

one thing that occurred in my mind and it also surprised me a little that u didn't mention sirius anywhere in the whole story.
u mentioned his brother but no sirius how come?

don't u think that both andromeda and sirius were a little similar character as both have same view .

u have portrayed her as she didn't like a single member of her family but sirius was also there so both would be a good friend as they have same opinion about pureblood . thats why i thought that there should be few line about him also in this chapter. i hope u understand what i want to say

but its completely ur story and i am sorry if u didn't like my review .

overall its well written . i completely enjoyed it.
PS- sorry i am very curious person but can u now justify that how she ended up in slytherin as u have portrayed her she must not be in slytherin.

10/10

waiting for next chapter ^_^

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