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Review:imaginary lines says:
imaginary lines here!

wow. honestly, i think the way you portrayed dom in this was amazing! i enjoyed understanding the job of the mirror and its feelings of telling the heart's desires.

the way dom was feeling was also interesting too. her opinion on her family and the way she craved bill's attention was heartbreaking and understanding.

the mirror. i can't think of anything else but how you portrayed the mirror as the narrator! i had never thought of that, and when reading this, i was amazed. like i said before, understanding the job and the feelings that the mirror feels each time someone looks at his or her reflection makes my heart break. it cannot escape the life it is forced to lead.

well done!

Author's Response: hehe thank you very much!
I'm glad you liked it! It was a random idea I had after opening word to start and write!
Thanks for the challenge, review and 2nd place :D

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