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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Awww! That was so adorable! Really sweet moment! I thought it would've been even more romantic for Cassian to propose at the wedding itself, but regardless, it was a lovely moment! I had a feeling he was going to propose soon, especially when you mentioned Cassian talking to Athena's father.

Another great chapter! I think Athena is a great character, and you write her very well! I liked all the dialogue too - you actually make it really interesting. And I liked the bits with Fred and Tonks. And Ginny. xD

I'll admit it, part of the reason why I read your story was because of your status the other day about abandoning this. I just wanted to say, reviews shouldn't be the thing you use to judge how your story is. You should use yourself :) This is a really awesome story so far, and I would hate for you to stop writing it because of a lack of reviewers. SO HERE I AM. Keep writing and developing this story! I really like it so far and I'd be happy to keep on reading! And you should feel more than welcome to poke me in the future if you post future chapters! :)

- charlotte :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! As I said before, romance isn't really my strong point, so I'm really glad I pulled off that scene.

Thank you! Though I have been criticised in the past for relying too much on dialogue in my stories, so I have to keep an eye on that :P

Thank you so much for taking the time to review this story, it really was perfect timing and I'm sorry I didn't get onto the responses sooner. But once again, thank you. :)

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