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Review:maskedmuggle says:
I loved this! Great first chapter! I think your writing is really amazing - you are a talented writer and I can't wait to keep on reading! I haven't read Red Hair and a Beater's Bat, but it sounds like an interesting story that I hope I'll have time to check out soon. I like Athena already, and her sister Artemis as well. I thought it was fantastic how you managed to get out quite a bit of background information whilst still making this a really interesting chapter.

I really liked how the second half of the chapter related to something we know happened in the books, but was an event we didn't actually read about - so it was good to see it written. I liked Dung's interjections and how you kept it all really canon.

Lovely first chapter! -shall keep on reading now- :)

Author's Response: Sorry for how long it's taken me to respond to these reviews!
Thank you so much! Red Hair and a Beater's Bat isn't really required reading - it was my first story on the site and more just me playing around with Athena's character. I'm glad you found there to be a lot of background information - I've had people in the past saying I haven't done that very well, and it's an easy trap to fall into when you've been working with a character for a long time :P
I do try to keep it canon, but of course there will be diversions simply because I'm using an OC, let alone one so heavily involved in the Order. Thanks for the review!


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