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Review:pacific wizard says:
Tayla: Very good story and I like your plot and characterizations so far. Sorry I didn't review before this but I've had limited time for one of my favorite hobbies which is reading and reviewing HPFF fics.

Your Ginny character is well developed though I'd like to see her as a bit more feisty. This last chapter was a good portrayal of her but I think she would have been a bit more vocal toward Carrow and more protective of the first year.

I like Neville's character. You've put him in a strong position yet still tentative and feeling his way as he overcomes his timidity. He's growing into his leadership role. Luna's character could be more developed. She is nearly as smart as Hermione and her intuitiveness and wisdom is really unsurpassed. Neville's the heart of the D.A., Luna the brains and Ginny the soul. Your storyline just about has them there. Blend in the good-guy, bad-guy characters to your plot and you've got the makings of a very intriguing fanfic. I also like your subplot where Ginny is questioning Snape's disciplinary actions toward them. That's a cool story in of itself.

Well done and I will keep reading. PW

Author's Response: Awesome Review, thanks for that amount of feedback it's really useful and I will definetely take it on board. Thank you so much =)

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