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Review:Beeezie says:
Oh, I liked this a lot! I love little missing moments like these - they're so sweet. Ron's comment about his stomach joining a circus was classic Ron. It sounded like something he might have said in the books.

I've written a couple Quidditch scenes, and they can be really tough to keep from being repetitive and boring, but you did a really great job. I loved the way you wrote Lee Jordan's commentary - it fit with both Lee as a character and the way we saw him announcing. I also really appreciated the fact that you had Alicia score before anyone realized what she was doing - it was a really nice touch that helped bring the game to life.

I also think that you skipped ahead in the right spots, rather than drag it out - Ron walking down to the pitch, the score changing from 80-40 to 90-60 to 90-80... you had really great judgment about what was important to include and what wasn't.

Terrific story. :)

Happy review from a fellow Gryffie!

Author's Response: Hello, thanks for dropping by! I'm feeling really glad that people are still reading this and thank you so much for the review! And what a positive review it is. I feel a blush coming on. Thank you for your encouragement and I'm glad I was able to write something that you found enjoyable and managed to capture something of the feel of the books while expanding on a new side of things :)

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