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Review:LittleWelshGirl99 says:
Hi there!

I love the Little Red Riding Hood hints throughout this! A very clever and unique way of describing Tedy and Victoire...It is about Teddy and Victoire, isn't it? That's the only thing that might be a bit unclear to some readers; who its about. I'm assuming that Teddy was the wolf who eventually...ate? Little Red Riding Hood who was Victoire.

Beautiful, gorgeous, amazing descriptive writing and imagery! I had shivers going up my spine. Just be careful that you don't be repetitive!

So well done, 10/10! LWG x

Author's Response: Hi! :) It's actually about Teddy and Dominique, as I referenced that she was the younger of the sisters. But I can see how it can get confusing; I tried not to use their names as they felt out of place. Teddy is indeed the wolf of the story.

I leave it unclear as to what exactly he does. I centered it around a quiet lust and obsession, and the darkness associated with it, and I think a lot of terrible things could happen once it consumes him.

Thank you! :)


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