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Review:Beeezie says:
I'm back! (Sorry - I meant to get these done quicker than I have been. NaNo is eating my time.)

So! I thought that this was a really great one-shot. The progression was fantastic - you put in just the right memories to really draw me into their relationship, and I really felt for Narcissa when her optimism and hopes were shattered. I can definitely see how this would make her the ice queen we saw in the books.

In some ways, it felt like Lucius's change wasn't well explained, but after I sat here and thought about it for a bit, I decided that I liked that, because it really reflects the way life often works. It's often difficult to understand why people change, especially from the point of view of the person who was cheated on, so the slight confusion and discomfort actually worked, at least for me.

You did an amazing job with this. :)

Author's Response: Hey! No problem, NaNo can be time-consuming of course xD

I am flattered that you found this so good. I am glad the memories && emotions && stuff all came off realistically and nicely to you.

I actually intended to keep it that way, because I was writing it from Narcissa's point of view, so I wanted the confusion to be there, as to how & why Lucius changed so suddenly. As you said, that's the way life works, you often don't realize how people change. I am glad it worked for you :)

Thank you so much for reading && reviewing. I am really happy that you liked this :)

Cheers!
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