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Review:Livi_777 says:
Wow! That's really good, I'm afraid you haven't changed my opinion on Dramione but I think it's a really good story, considering that you've never written a one shot before and it is incredibly hard to wrap up a story in one chapter. Just a few observations
“Did you ever care? You never tell me you love me! Now tell me Draco, did you ever care about me? Did it hurt you when you saw me getting tortured by your Precious Aunt Bella?” This line returned mixed feelings! At first, I didn't think it sounded very much like the Hermione I know, but the last sentence is very in character! The reason that I don't like Dramione is that I am obsessive about canon and I don't think it is humanly possible to write Draco in character while he is in a relationship with Hermione, since that in itself doesn't fit in with his personality and at first I thought that you might actually have had him, until he started to talk in metaphor about Hermione's torturing, which I don't think is very much like him at all, I'd say that was more Cedric's genre!
However, I did like the flashback. I think you got Bellatrix and Ron very well, which pleases me because I'm one of the biggest Ron-lovers you'll ever meet and a huge Romione shipper, and I think that moment was really well written. So, overall, a great story! (Do excuse the mahusive review!)

Author's Response: Darnit, ah well, to each her own. I don't mind canon, i mean i respect it but i always think it sounds really boring because you know how the story is going to end (happily ever after) at least with AU you can do anything. but i am terrible about keeping people in character so sorry about that.
Thanks for reading :D


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