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Review:Manga_girl says:
Hello, its Mangagirl from the forums here for the review tag!

I really like this, its funny but also nicely written! At some points it was a bit unclear what era it was in (and I had to check at the story info bit) and there were a few gramattical errors but apart from that this was AWESOME! Lovely story and I really like Caitie, she is a really cool character, no way Mary Sue. And I like how you made sure she wasnt stereotypical. I see too many Hufflepuff's who are 'duffers'. If they are in Hufflepuff it means they are friendly but as you said not too brave, clever or cunning. There are not only 4 types of personality so I like how you made her a cool Hufflepuff.

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Author's Response: Ahh thanks so much!
Ooh that's a good point, I might edit some details of the era in later. I'm so glad you don't think she is a Mary Sue etc and I'm just really glad you like it :) Thanks for reviewing :)

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